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Justin Deming's avatar

Love the rhythm and free-flowing nature of the poem, Meg. I dig it! It brings me back to the fresh and funky feel of 90s hip hop. Maybe a group like Digable Planets. Here’s one of my favorites by them, “Where I’m From”.

https://youtu.be/sl-pjb7y3y0?si=FuHC8Mva_4kgFNQS

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

You had fun with this, Meg, and it shows. Stand out phrases: "it dawned on me I haven’t slept ..." "my attributes predetermine my value " "I want it unwashed unpolished untamed ..." "the window is small if you blink you might miss it". And my favorite: "you’re only young once dammit so what". I had a relationship like this once, eons ago. I remember being mostly exhausted all the time.

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