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[Ben Wakeman]

This was visceral and intense. You have such a gift for capturing physical intimacy in all it's rawness and vulnerability. Loved this one.

[Meg Oolders]

Thank you, Ben. What a lovely compliment!!! 💜

[Andrei Atanasov]

Love experiments like these!

[Meg Oolders]

Thanks for observing this one, Andrei. 🥂

[Sharron Bassano]

"... against the wall and beneath you in my mind..."

"...the walls shake under the weight of our crumbling world..."

You have tapped into the memory of most of your readers here, Meg. Beautiful.

[Meg Oolders]

Thank you, friend. 💜

[Wil Dalton]

I’m always impressed by your willingness to embrace the raw

[Meg Oolders]

💜 Thanks, Wil.

[Justin Deming]

This is intense, Meg. I loved it!

[Meg Oolders]

Cheers, Justin!

[Samuél Lopez-Barrantes]

Loved this. Especially the descriptions of such tender, physical intimacy. Bravo friend. Turns out you're also a poet?

[Meg Oolders]

Cheers, mon ami!

Yes, I DO (poetry), therefore I BE (a poet). https://stockfiction.substack.com/s/poetry

💜🥂🙂

[Samuél Lopez-Barrantes]

Descartes gets a bad rap but I agree with this philosophy ^

[K.C. Knouse]

The desperation expressed in these lines is both tragic and beautiful. You have a gift for verse, Meg.

[Meg Oolders]

Thank you! 🙏🏻

[Ororo Munroe]

So, how did sleepaway camp go? Did he do ok? LOL

[Meg Oolders]

He did great! Can't wait to go back next summer. 😁